My Second ‘Done in Only Five Minutes’

Posted: October 4, 2012 in Cryptics, Rhymes

**it’s during one of those moments when a great idea gets in to your mind and you just needed to write it down and formulate it in rhymes. It usually takes some great inspiration, or an overwhelming emotion to make something like this… in less than five minutes.

by Jericho Carrillo on Wednesday, 30 November 2011 at 11:40

In Limbo

In this ride I would take a hitch

Twisting, twitching, I missed you pitch

I’m jumping for the killswitch

But I’d still want you in my wishlist

Make this go, make it stop now

Before I let myself get drowned now

I better rest from this bitter best

I want to say ‘I love you’ but I don’t know how

And there she goes yet nobody knows

How this seed of love in my heart grows

She’s heaven sent, but complain, I can’t

Straight to this fantasy from my reality bent

Make this go, make it stop now

I want to let myself get drowned now

It’s good to rest from this bitter best

I’d only want to make you say you love me but you don’t know how

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